събота, 12 май 2012 г.

MY BETTER HALF



 MY BETTER HALF

Maybe I could really be
Your truly loving friend indeed

Bewitching, charming and making an
End to all your fears –
That suits me to a
T… no matter how much
Energy I have to put
Rifling my deepest heart recesses

Hugging my greatest pains
And fears…no matter how
Long I would suffer from
False friends’ promises and love…

 Diana Teneva

Written for:


Phrase or Slang (PS) – MY BETTER HALF

5 коментара:

  1. I love the way you danced around the second "T" - a true master of letters ;-)
    Хитруша, с други думи.

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    1. Thanks, Mariya!

      Може би в дребните детайли се крие разковничето на хубавата поезия - да убедиш читателя,че владееш много добре езика...

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  2. Interesting take on the prompt~ I love Acrostics, this one is
    truly intriguing in the review of news~ I enjoyed your take on the prompt~

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  3. I am so struck by the last line. How true it is. We all dream to find the better half. Beautifully written.

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