вторник, 27 март 2012 г.

Haiku Heights - ENDURANCE



endurance - strength
tightly embracing the blue
patience of mine

patience of mine
waiting for the morning
born out of night's womb

born out of night's womb 
morning stars lit in the sky
endurance - strength

Diana Teneva

written for Haiku Heights

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    1. Yes, that was the purpose! I hope it'll be be correctly understood! Thank you for the nice words!

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  2. The imagery is so fantastic and full of hope. Beautiful haiku!

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    1. Full of hope - maybe that's right because I'm a person full of hope that's why my haiku are the same!!!

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  3. Morning stars is a perfect description of the rewards of endurance!

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    1. Morning stars as a reward of endurance - it's very interesting point of view - I didn't think about that!!! thank you for sharing your opinion - I appreciate that!

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  4. I enjoyed your set of haiku very much. I especially like the lines
    "patience of mine
    waiting for the morning"
    Thank you.

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  5. Този коментар бе премахнат от автора.

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  6. "patience of mine
    waiting for the morning" - I've experienced that many times...Thank you for the nice words!!!

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  7. This is ... awesome! A nice cascading haiku series. Loved reading it. Thank you for visiting my weblog Diana.

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  8. I love your poetry, Chèvrefeuille, that's why it's apleasure for me to visit your blog!:)))

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