петък, 13 април 2012 г.

Haiku Heights - WARMTH


GISSEN

far eruption point
warmth reaching my galaxy …
words were first to come

Diana Teneva

Written for:
 
Haiku Heights
 
April  Heights - Day 13 - #125 - WARMTH

10 коментара:

  1. The last line is perfect! I like the way you link "words" to the prompt.
    MK

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  2. Very good. Extraterrestrial life comes for a visit.

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  3. Yes, it's our future! We have to learn to communicate with E.T.!

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  4. What a beautiful thought converted into a haiku..I see words raining.. loved it.. Thanks..

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    1. Thanks, Ramesh! I try really hard to write poetry in English because my mother tongue is Bulgarian and your encouragement helps me keep going...

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  5. Very nice haiku, Diana. Your English is perfect! :)

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  6. The Gospel of John begins, "In the beginning was the Word..."

    Your words remind me of those ancient words.

    “The Warmth of Your Breath”

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    1. Yes, that was my intention - I'm happy that you understood my haiku correctly!!! Thank you for that!!!

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