неделя, 8 април 2012 г.

Haiku Heights - PLAY





lined sunbeams playing
with the rainy clouds up there
couldn’t caress the earth

Diana Teneva

Written for Haiku Heights 

April  Heights - Day 8 - #120 - PLAY

6 коментара:

  1. what is beautiful in these lines is that the sun beams speak through you .

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  2. Lovely haiku and beautifull just a thought.. should it be 'can't' to show the present moment like in first two lines..

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  3. A special haiku . I like your thought of sunbeams playing.

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