четвъртък, 5 април 2012 г.

Haiku Heights - WAVES



stone by stone
thrown deep in the lake
making waves
Diana Teneva
Written for Haiku Heights
April  Heights - Day 5 - #117 - WAVES

4 коментара:

  1. Diana -- lovely content --

    If I might, I suggest revisiting the syllable count for the forms of either 3-5-3 syllables or 5-7-5 syllables. Either is acceptable for Leo's challenge. Presently, you have 5-5-3.

    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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