Beautiful..
Lovely!
Yeah! bang on!! I can hear the splash!!My Day Five
Diana -- lovely content -- If I might, I suggest revisiting the syllable count for the forms of either 3-5-3 syllables or 5-7-5 syllables. Either is acceptable for Leo's challenge. Presently, you have 5-5-3.This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.
Beautiful..
ОтговорИзтриванеLovely!
ОтговорИзтриванеYeah! bang on!! I can hear the splash!!
ОтговорИзтриванеMy Day Five
Diana -- lovely content --
ОтговорИзтриванеIf I might, I suggest revisiting the syllable count for the forms of either 3-5-3 syllables or 5-7-5 syllables. Either is acceptable for Leo's challenge. Presently, you have 5-5-3.
This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.