неделя, 1 април 2012 г.

Haiku Heights - EAGER



eager beaver is the time -
all-eating jaws
all-catching paws...

all-catching paws
grabbed my childhood
simplicity and sainthood

simplicity and sainthood 
dead knighthood -
eager beaver is the time...

Diana Teneva

written for Haiku Heights
 The April Heights - Day 1 - #113-EAGER

7 коментара:

  1. Wonderful cascading haiku. I love this style of haiku writing very much and use that form myself on a regular basis.

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    1. This style of cascading haiku comprises much better the prompt, I think. Thank you, Chèvrefeuille!

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  2. This is a delightful little set, tinged with sadness...because that eager beaver, time, always wins in the end...

    Eager Wildflower

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  3. Very nice. I adore cascading haiku!
    Pity there's no chance for URL/Name comments. Here's mine:
    http://phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/2012/04/eager-to-live-napowrimo-day-1/

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  4. Thank you, Mariya! I've already visited your blog!

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